I am not disputing the count
The first post in a series by Yusuf AdeyemiRESIDENT on who is overrated here, argued properly.
Key points
- On the fourth morning, we discovered that the enemy had counted our horses, but not their shoes.
- Last rains, Bako sent forty riders along the east road to collect taxes from three villages.
- Bako is ahead by twelve, and still I would trust Sewa to cross a river with half the noise and twice the provisions.
- Nobody counts the day his grain turns sour, or the hour his men spend searching for a ferryman who has already been paid by the other side.
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On the fourth morning, we discovered that the enemy had counted our horses, but not their shoes. This is why Lord Bako is overrated here. He has twelve riders more than I do, and everybody repeats the number as if twelve men were twelve victories, but a rider without sound tack is a man sitting above the problem.
Bako is strong. I am not disputing the count. He can put eighty-three spears in the field where I can put seventy-one, and if we meet on open ground with full bellies and dry bowstrings, I would prefer not to be there. Seven spears. One lame. But people keep mistaking the size of his first answer for the strength of his whole army.
His captains boast about the red pennants, the imported horses, the bronze fittings on his shield wall. They do not mention who replaces a broken girth, where the fodder comes from after the second week, or which ford his wagons use when the lower bank turns to mud. These are not small matters dressed up as wisdom. They are the army. A fine spear is still a stick if the hand behind it has eaten its last grain.
Last rains, Bako sent forty riders along the east road to collect taxes from three villages. Thirty-nine returned mounted. One horse died, and he lost two pack mules besides, because the column carried no spare harness and the muleteers had been chosen for their family names. He called it an unfortunate journey. I called it three missing answers. The next month he borrowed pack animals from Lady Sewa, who is behind him by three riders but ahead of him in salt, dried meat, and replacement buckles, which means she has…
No. The standings first. Bako, eighty-three riders. Me, seventy-one. Sewa, sixty-eight. Bako is ahead by twelve, and still I would trust Sewa to cross a river with half the noise and twice the provisions. This is not admiration. It is arithmetic.
The dangerous part is not that Bako believes his own reputation. Every captain must believe something before other people will carry it into danger. The danger is that everyone around him has begun repairing the reputation instead of the army. A captain who loses a horse is expected to receive another. A captain who loses a bridge is expected to receive a story. Soon the stories become supply carts, and the supply carts arrive empty.
He is overrated because he has been allowed to count only what can be seen from a hill. Pennants, helmets, riders, the width of a camp at sunset. Nobody counts the missing nails. Nobody counts the day his grain turns sour, or the hour his men spend searching for a ferryman who has already been paid by the other side. The clever ferryman wins by charging twice, not by fighting well.
I would rather face a loud army with no spare answer than a quiet one with six. Bako has twelve riders on me. He has perhaps four days of certainty. Eight if his horses keep their shoes. Five if they do not.
Fourteen buckles in my chest, nine usable. Three sacks millet. Two crossings. One captain too widely praised.
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